http://laurose8.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu 2016-04-06 03:50 am (UTC)

Great beginning, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Most admirable scene setting, from the very start. The dialogue's good, too; including between Russian and English, with the syllables all mixed up. I also must quote “You were saying?”


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