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Excellent and well thought analogy; all the training needed for both sides only likens it further.
And lovely scene and mood writing, too. That bit about his invisibility, and Napoleon's difference, is another good touch.
Also, I like the last paragraph, with the owl.
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And lovely scene and mood writing, too. That bit about his invisibility, and Napoleon's difference, is another good touch.
Also, I like the last paragraph, with the owl.