A really intense story. You kept it up so well throughout every chapter, keeping me on tenterhooks waiting for the next instalment. As I am a person who does tend to get bored quickly, this was a superlative piece of work. I tried to guess how you would manage to rescue the boys from Mills after the last chapter...and your solution was so natural, I keep wondering why did I not think of that myself? In my mind, the mark of a good writer. Really nice job.
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