http://glennagirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] glennagirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2012-03-28 12:38 pm

Golden - A Little Drabble Do Ya

My Wednesday Drabble...



I saw him in the golden hues of sunset, all shadows and highlights, eyes like glinting blue diamonds in the fading light.  

He was beautiful.  

I didn't know his name or why he was there, shirtless and shining among so many forgettable faces.  

He wasn't a journeyman or laborer, and yet he was there among them, at the end of a day filled with the back-breaking work reflected in the fields beyond.

He caught me staring at him, and the expression that held me in thrall teased at a smile on those full lips.

 And I wondered...



[identity profile] svetlanacat4.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Love the drabble and drool over the laptop...

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Excuse me, I need to go fetch a tissue to wipe up the drool. Sigh. Nicely done.

[identity profile] jkkitty.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Some cold water please, I think I'm going to need it.

[identity profile] spotsycool.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*sits and gazes, enthralled by the lovely picture you painted with this drabble*
Simply beautiful.
And now I, like the rest of the cousins, must wipe the drool off my keyboard. ;)

[identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Joining in the admiration for the beautiful way you paint a beautiful picture.

Also, that's a fine last line!