http://mrua7.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu 2013-06-11 11:22 pm (UTC)

Wow a lot happened in this story and very quick moving. I particularly liked the headers you used to delineate the passage of time. Good little story here.
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