http://laurose8.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu 2013-11-12 05:08 pm (UTC)

Thank you. This is a really good fic. I love that last line.

I also love the idea of Napoleon liking cheesy horror movies, to relax from his own Thrushed life.

You did Napoleon's nightmare very well, so the reader knew it was a nightmare, but still empathised with his emotions. It's very difficult not to have a touch of bathos when the dreamer wakes, but none here.

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