http://glennagirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] glennagirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2015-07-15 10:30 am

Does It Hurt? - A Little Drabble Do Ya 7/15

Sweltering hot with no place to go.  That was Napoleon's problem.  He had on a new suit too, but it was already designated for the trash heap as soon as he had New York in his sights.

"Illya!  Illya, wake up and untie me."  The Russian had been thrown into the cell a seemingly unconscious heap of pale and blond.  The guards hadn't bothered to tie him up this time, he looked so far gone.

"Be quiet, Napoleon.  Let us at least have the appearance of stealth."

"Oh, I guess you're sort of faking it."

"Yes, that's what this is."

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah the appearance of stealth, smart Russian. Good drabble.

[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I bet Illya can roll his eyes even when they're closed :-)

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh if ever there were a more perfect statement, and funny too! You'll have to use that line in a story! :D

[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll have to try and get it in somewhere :-)

[identity profile] jkkitty.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Sneaky Russian

[identity profile] rhys-whittaker.livejournal.com 2015-07-15 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice one! And loved the descrip. of Illya being a "heap of pale and blond."

Also enjoyed everyone else's comments! :-D

[identity profile] rhys-whittaker.livejournal.com 2015-07-17 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, G! Thank U for the nice welcome! I look forward to reading more of your postings on here and on FF.N. I told M that when I am writing my main stories I don't tend to read as much until I am in a non-creative mode. (She said she's like that, too.) But trust me, I will be reading your writings and hanging with you guys on here.

[identity profile] lindafishes8.livejournal.com 2015-07-16 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
He never lets on how badly he's hurt, even to his trusted partner. But Solo can read him like a book!

[identity profile] otherhawk.livejournal.com 2015-07-17 11:54 am (UTC)(link)
This was brilliant, thank you! I also really liked the phrase "seemingly unconscious heap of pale and blond." In fact, I liked the whole thing.