Again, very good work on all the ocs, male and female, and on Angelique. The dialect is convincing and enjoyable. I must quote Illya had to grin at the look of satisfaction on Angelique’s face when she realized her mother was obeying her.
The bit about no birds singing is an excellent touch.
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The bit about no birds singing is an excellent touch.
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Thanks for hanging in with me!