02.12.2018 Short Affair Challenge: The Pepper Bandits Affair

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

As usual, I'm over 1K words by about 60.  Thanks for putting up with my long-windedness and flouting the rules.

Prompts:  Green and Spice

URL:  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12794308/5/Short-Affair-Tales-from-Section-VII

Comments

[duckys-lady.livejournal.com]

Very clever! I can see IK coming up with pepper spray!

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I may need to have the Illya-invented pepper spray show up in a future story.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Loved it, and the banter...well done. You nailed both character's personalities. Great Short Affair story!

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

Thanks! glad the banter worked. had fun writing it.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

I so want to see the Pepper Bandits in action :D

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

Oh, I so agree! If I do a post-retirement story, I'll need to flip a coin to see if they'll be the Pepper Bandits or the Spice Boys.

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Neat. Great last line.

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Oddly enough, came to me after I'd used "spice" earlier (and deleted) but this was a much better use of the prompt.