http://jantojones.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2018-06-11 07:24 pm

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2018-06-11 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
As soon as I saw the city I immediately thought of the cheese even before I saw the picture! You had a lot of memorable lines in this one. Great job cuz!

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2018-06-11 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Not weak at all, at least to me. Loved this line did nothing to quench the fire that was already burning in Napoleon’s loins." This one too, "For now through, Napoleon very definitely didn’t need his partner in his head. He dismissed the man from his mind "

And the last lines were so Napoleon! "He’d read somewhere that eating cheese at night would cause nightmares. Napoleon didn’t see that being a problem, as he had no intention of sleeping."

I say again, well done cuz!

[identity profile] duckys-lady.livejournal.com 2018-06-12 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
What do you bet IK thought he would get to eat some of that cheese? ;-) Nice chapter!