http://alynwa.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] alynwa.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu 2013-01-08 06:09 pm (UTC)

Great take on the prompt! You fell victim to one of my favorite words to get wrong: occasion. Check the last line of your story. This tale made me want to read more. Maybe one day you'll write a longer version?
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