11.12.2018 Short Affair Challenge: Protection from Harm, Part 2

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

This part is gen, but I'm rating it gen-mature to stay in line with the non-graphic violence of Part 1 and eventually Part 3.

Prompt words:  vault, bargain, & yellow
Word count:  ~975
Link:  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12794308/23/Short-Affair-Tales-from-Section-VII

Comments

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Excellent! You built the tension beautifully until it finally exploded. And you left us with a worrisome cliffie to boot! :D

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It was a challenge keeping this part to 1000 words and still build up to another "cliffie." on the other hand, it was great fun writing the dialogue.