http://jantojones.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2019-02-12 09:11 pm

Finishing Up Old Business - Chapter 2 (Non-challenge Story)

Back in September, I responded to an impromptu prompt picture posted by [livejournal.com profile] glennagirl, and I wrote a story called 'Finishing Up Old Business'. Several people commented that they would like to see a follow-up, so I've written a second chapter.

The story is basically three men talking, so it is fairly dialogue heavy.

Click the original prompt pic to go to the first chapter (on AO3).


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[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2019-02-12 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG my heart be still? A second chapter? You rock cuz!!!!

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2019-02-12 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm guessing our muses might have bumped into each other on holiday...

[identity profile] glennagirl.livejournal.com 2019-02-12 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
This is very well done, the tone and conversation just what we would expect from these two. You might have a series on your hands.

[identity profile] duckys-lady.livejournal.com 2019-02-13 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful! Could there be a round three in there?

[identity profile] gevr.livejournal.com 2019-02-13 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
a well told, very nice story. Both chapter one and two !