The Bus Ride - Pic Fic (only a week late) - May 7th

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

This is a terrible title. I don't know why I have such a blind spot with them. Anyway, you can find the story by clicking the pic.

Comments

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

This was also a little longer story than you usually write and it takes time to settle into that many words.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

It did get away from me and, as I'm sure you often do, I had to keep going back to alter things which no longer made sense.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Luckily I don't have that often, my problem is I suddenly hit a wall as to which direction the story should take. lol!