The Bus Ride - Pic Fic (only a week late) - May 7th

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

This is a terrible title. I don't know why I have such a blind spot with them. Anyway, you can find the story by clicking the pic.

Comments

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

This was well worth the wait. You did an excellent job with the prompt! I'm afraid mine is going to be even later. lol!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)
Mine took as long as it did because, aside from the choreography an enclosed space, I went through about 5 possible endings.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

This was also a little longer story than you usually write and it takes time to settle into that many words.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

It did get away from me and, as I'm sure you often do, I had to keep going back to alter things which no longer made sense.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Luckily I don't have that often, my problem is I suddenly hit a wall as to which direction the story should take. lol!

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

A good title for an excellent fic. Really well April-ed, that jantojones!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)

I'm never really sure about my April-ing because I've never actually seen the Girl from U.N.C.L.E. I base my version of her on the way she is portrayed in fan fic.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Trust me, fan fiction is the way to go when it comes to April Dancer. Bus Ride indeed!