http://jantojones.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2019-06-10 07:51 pm
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The Downside of Wearing the White Hat - Short Affair - June 10th

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Prompts - Arid/White
Word Count - 1066 (broke my own rule)


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[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2019-06-10 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I like this very much cuz, especially the end, little nuance in Illya's voice that only Solo detected.

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2019-06-10 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Being a musician I understand picking up on certain nuances that the average person might miss, both verbal and non-verbal. A particular look in the eye, a twitch of the corner of the mouth, a simple shift in body position can signal a lot.
I think in card playing it might be called a 'tell'...unconscious body language that gives something away.

Bottom line as you said, only Napoleon knows Illya well enough to pick up on such tiny things... well and we the writers who torment him (them).

[identity profile] gevr.livejournal.com 2019-06-10 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
This made me laugh, especially the end :-)

[identity profile] duckys-lady.livejournal.com 2019-06-11 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
I love IK's final solution! ;-) Great story!