http://glennagirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] glennagirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2013-05-22 07:34 am

No Reason - A Little Drabble Do Ya

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Neither man had anything to offer, no words of wisdom or comfort.  One of their own was gone, a good agent who would not live to serve another day in the fight against evil and corruption.

Napoleon felt tired, burdened by the loss.  What did it mean to be Chief Enforcement Agent?  It meant you felt angry and … empty.
“Why do some of us come home safe, Illya?’  A sigh punctuated the misery… “How is that we survive and he didn’t?”

Illya recognized his friend’s agony, but for all of his facility with languages, there were no words now.

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
"but for all of his facility with languages, there were no words now." Loved that line!

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes definitely perfect irony.

[identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
This is good! Thank you.

[identity profile] alynwa.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Survivor's guilt is a powerful emotion. Great story.

[identity profile] avrovulcan.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
An emotional piece. Good one.

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2013-05-22 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Heartbreaking and beautiful. You have a wonderful command of words, to paint such a vivid picture with so few. The last sentence is particularly poignant, as is the part about Napoleon feeling angry and empty.