http://avirra.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] avirra.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2014-08-27 05:00 am

It's All About April - Drabble Tale - What Happens in Vegas, Pt 9

The bathroom door was locked, but hardly an obstacle. Once opened, they saw Mark crumpled on the tile floor, his jacket halfway off.

April and Napoleon hurried to his side. Not wanting to crowd them, Illya stepped around, turning off the now icy water coming from the showerhead.

"His breathing is regular, but he's unconscious."

Napoleon carefully eased the jacket the rest of the way off of Mark. April saw something drop to the floor and gingerly picked it up.

"It's a dart of some sort."

"We need to get it to the lab and Mark to Medical."


Vegas 1 - Vegas 2 - Vegas 3 - Vegas 4 - Vegas 5 - Vegas 6 - Vegas 7 - Vegas 8

[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com 2014-08-27 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
You're slowly cranking the tension up on the wonderful tale.

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2014-08-28 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Yep, I agree with Janto...a slow build. The deft hand, leaving us wanting MORE!

[identity profile] lindafishes8.livejournal.com 2014-08-28 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't a guy use the bathroom without being shot with a sleep dart?
Story is progressing nicely. More, more, MORE!