http://jantojones.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] section7mfu2018-07-02 09:56 pm

[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2018-07-02 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll repeat my AO3 comment here...'Wow did you build up the suspense beautifully on this. Loved your description of Illya fighting back a smile; could so picture that. Great chapter!'

[identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com 2018-07-02 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Well Y-ed, that writer. And thanks for pointing out there's a Yukon in Florida.

[identity profile] gevr.livejournal.com 2018-07-03 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
my AO3 response was : I love how you build up so much suspense in so little lines ! And I can just see Illya swallowing his smile and putting on a straight face :-DD