I'll repeat my AO3 comment here...'Wow did you build up the suspense beautifully on this. Loved your description of Illya fighting back a smile; could so picture that. Great chapter!'
It came as a surprise to me that there was a Yukon in Florida. I just googled 'places in the US beginning with Y' and this came up on the list. When I saw it had became a ghost town in 1963, I knew it was a perfect setting.
my AO3 response was : I love how you build up so much suspense in so little lines ! And I can just see Illya swallowing his smile and putting on a straight face :-DD
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Date: 2018-07-02 09:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-03 07:21 am (UTC)He is good at keeping his face impassive but, as I said, Napoleon knows him too well :-)
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Date: 2018-07-02 09:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-03 07:23 am (UTC)It came as a surprise to me that there was a Yukon in Florida. I just googled 'places in the US beginning with Y' and this came up on the list. When I saw it had became a ghost town in 1963, I knew it was a perfect setting.
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Date: 2018-07-03 01:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-03 06:20 pm (UTC)