[identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com 2019-09-22 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! I'll repeat my comment posted on AO3: Wow, the beginning was taught and very visual. I could just see Illya in his baseball cap strolling towards his target. Over all, a well conceived and beautifully written story! The Long Affair was brilliant idea for an anniversary challenge!

[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com 2019-09-22 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I've left a comment on AO3 but, needless to say, this was a wonderful piece.

[identity profile] duckys-lady.livejournal.com 2019-09-26 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
Terrific story -- and a great idea to celebrate the anniversary this way!