Absolutely fabulous, the imagery...especially of the blood pooling on the linen was a stand out for sure. I agree with threecee, this could have easily been an episode on TV. Well done!
OH, btw I wasn't able to comment on DW either. Weird, as there was one comment from Laurose.
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Date: 2017-07-01 06:36 pm (UTC)DW won't let me comment there.
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Date: 2017-07-01 07:33 pm (UTC)OH, btw I wasn't able to comment on DW either. Weird, as there was one comment from Laurose.
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