Silence - A Little Drabble Do Ya! - Nov 25th

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

The silence was so palpable that he began to wonder if he had somehow gone deaf in the last few seconds. Every one of those seconds felt as though it was being stretched into minutes; or was it hours? How long had he been waiting? How much more time would pass before he knew whether his message got through?

The silence continued for what he could have sworn was an eternity until, finally, the radio crackled to life. The noise had startled him, but he smiled at the next sound.

“We’ve got your location Illya. We’ll soon have you home.”

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Comments

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

the worry-over now

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Ewww what wonderful tension created in so few words. Brava!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Absolutely :-)

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you very, very much :-D

[otherhawk.livejournal.com]

Such a wonderfully evocative image in so few words. Very nice.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :-)