Thank you for a very fine read. I love the dialogue “I despise monologuing,” and “Try not to sound so surprised,”. Also, Napoleon didn't need to understand to understand.
The action is both canonesque and interesting. Tour making brief characters such as the girls solid and sympathetic does help.
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Date: 2016-08-28 02:27 am (UTC)The action is both canonesque and interesting. Tour making brief characters such as the girls solid and sympathetic does help.