Writer’s and Reader’s Choice

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My latest two chapters of The Breach of Promise Affair included Edith Partridge. I found her more challenging to capture than characters from other episodes. I’d love some feedback on how she turned out. Gentle critique welcome. :D

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[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Great rec for Writer's and Reader's choice! Thank you!

[alynwa.livejournal.com]

Your link works, but the image itself is locked so it can't be seen. Just so you know.

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

You've captured the lady in all her original, gentle, terrifying madness. And what an ending! How will they escape her?

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

Oops. Thanks. :)

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I struggled to find her voice. I rewrote her dialogue a lot but was never really satisfied with it. I’m so glad her personality came through. :)