An excellent take on both prompts, Cuz! I could feel Napoleon sense of loss. I love the way you have them using banter as a way of saying what they really mean.
(As usual, I've started something, but who knows if I'll finish it. I'm feeling a lot more human, so hopefully tomorrow will be a good writing day.)
Thank you so much! That's exactly what I intended with the banter, so i'm happy it worked! Glad you're feeling a bit better. Keep snug and rest. The stories will come when it's time.
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Date: 2017-11-28 10:30 pm (UTC)(As usual, I've started something, but who knows if I'll finish it. I'm feeling a lot more human, so hopefully tomorrow will be a good writing day.)
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Date: 2017-11-30 04:14 pm (UTC)Wonderful as always. That last passage put a smile on my face.
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Date: 2017-11-30 06:14 pm (UTC)