"The Reinking Affair" Chapter 6

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

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Comments

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

And the intrigue deepens :-D

(Minor point (I hope you don't mind me mentioning) - In the second line Reinking seems to know that Hunt is dead before he receives the phone call telling him.)

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

I noticed that as well - also in the previous chapter you had reinking's name as reinfield...when you were talking about his previous partner.

I'm wondering if the seemingly throw away facts that Reinking was a blond, yearned for female attention, and was slightly envious of IK being young etc. (in the first chapter) could possibly point to Reinking as one of the bad guys. My mind works in devious ways I'm afraid.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'll go fix that right now. A continuity error was bound to happen to me as this story takes so many turns.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

LOL Thank you! I missed that one...must have had 'Dracula' on the brain. Wonder if that's a Freudian slip?