Another fine mess

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Short Affair challenge, 3 September. Prompts: admire, surface, purple

Napoleon and Illya compete on not showing they care about each other

https://archiveofourown.org/works/15882138

Illya in bandages. Napoleon horrified

Comments

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this very mich. Job’s Comforter...what a fitting description.

I also appreciated how the dialogue at the end showed me what was happening with the food. Very nicely done.

[duckys-lady.livejournal.com]

This is a fun read! I love Napoleon's perfect comfort foods. :-)

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

They are so much like brothers. And there's nothing quite like a near-death experience for getting the blood flowing *ahem*. I love the way you've written this. You have their voices spot-on.

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

So in character and well-done. And Napoleon appears to have a new talent: clairvoyance!