The Good Guys - Drabble Poen for Random Acts of Poetry Day - Oct 3rd

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

I'd just like to say that, poetry and I are not good bedfellows. I love to read poetry, but I can't write it for toffee. Nevertheless, here is my attempt.

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They own the darkness
But still walk in light
Always prepared
Up for the fight

With evil amongst us
Hidden from view
They risk their survival
To do what they do

They often get hurt
Some even die
But others step up
And with evil they vie

Two at the top
Who we all admire
Joined by a friendship
Which was forged in the Fire

One is American
And filled up with charm
But is dangerous to know
When others do harm

The other is a Russian
With icy blue eyes
He does what he can
So that nobody dies

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Comments

[redqueen88.livejournal.com]

good toffee - good job

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)

[gevr.livejournal.com]

you certainly earned your toffee :-)

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Well done! I think you made a very fine confection for us :D

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Thank you. The first verse is particularly good.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

That was fantabulous cuz!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)
I like the first verse, but it went downhill after that :-D

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :-)