That's why it got away from me. There were certain plot points which had to be put in, and I had to allow the story time to get to those points, so it definitely wouldn't have worked as a shorter piece. I'm just glad it worked out how I wanted it, and that it flowed well.
Did I have you fooled at the beginning, or did you realise early what was happening?
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Date: 2019-02-01 10:39 pm (UTC)Did I have you fooled at the beginning, or did you realise early what was happening?