This was an absolutely brilliant opening. I loved the way you described Wavarly's use of his briar pipe as a 'tell'. An incredible observation. Looking forward to reading more. We've both got our WIPs now, don't we?
PS I liked what you did with the photo. Black and white is always so much more moody and noir.
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Date: 2019-07-31 02:18 am (UTC)PS I liked what you did with the photo. Black and white is always so much more moody and noir.