A Little Drabble Do Ya - The Pick Up Part Ten

[avrovulcan.livejournal.com]

Link to The Pick Up Part Nine: http://section7mfu.livejournal.com/237882.html

The Pick Up Part Ten.

Retrieved envelope in hand, Illya and Napoleon left the mansion. Dubois and co, still unconscious, would be taken into custody when the clean-up crew from Paris arrived.

“So, Illya, ready to go home now?”

Sighing, “I was ready three days ago.”

“I wonder what’s in this envelope, must be important for Waverly to divert us here for it.”

They climbed into their car and drove through the picturesque village.

“Truthfully at the moment, I do not care. I am starving, can we eat now?” Illya pleaded, indicating a quaint French restaurant they were passing.

Grinning, “Yeah, you’ve earned it.”

“Spasibo.”

Comments

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

food first, now that guy has it right.

[avrovulcan.livejournal.com]

He, he. Yeah stomach first, all else later! Thanks for commenting.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

This was a very good drabble story and a satisfying ending. There were nice visuals, good action and plenty of excitement in it. I'd say you've mastered the technique of using the drabble to improve one's writing.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

It's a happy ending when Illya gets a meal in the final chapter. Brava!

[avrovulcan.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It's not quite the end, one more to go, there's an epilogue to come.

It's all thanks to your encouragement that I've improved.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Yay! More!

[avrovulcan.livejournal.com]

He, he! Yes, trust Illya to find a restaurant in a village in the middle of nowhere. I've got an epilogue in the works, then I've got to start on a new story. Thanks for commenting, it's appreciated.