Ah, the misery of Illya at sea, set against a backdrop of DH Lawrence's "The Mystic Blue"! What could be better? Well, maybe Illya could think of a few things...
Your description of the raging storm was quite wonderful and exciting, and Napoleon's surprising revelation of why he loves to sail helped to ground your story (literally!) at the end. Great job!
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Date: 2013-07-23 09:55 pm (UTC)Your description of the raging storm was quite wonderful and exciting, and Napoleon's surprising revelation of why he loves to sail helped to ground your story (literally!) at the end. Great job!