[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] section7mfu
Ten -
The heart rate trebles.

Nine -
Breath quickens and becomes shallow.

Eight -
Pupils dilate with the exhilaration.

Seven -
Right thumb twitches as it hovers over the trigger switch.

Six –
The ghost of a smile comes to rest on his lips.

Five –
A quick glance round verifies their position is secure.

Four –
A brief mental check to reconfirm the placement of charges.

Three –
A long, deep breath to control his heat rate.

Two –
Eyes close in a slow blink.

One –
Thumb presses down.

BOOOOOOOM !!!

The ghost smile is usurped by a grin.

“Enjoy that, Tovarisch?”

“Da.”

Date: 2014-10-22 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com
Oh my Gawd! breathless! I especially loved the line "Eyes close in a slow blink" wow!

Date: 2014-10-22 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jkkitty.livejournal.com
Oh yes, he does enjoy his booms doesn't he

Date: 2014-10-22 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yelizaveta52.livejournal.com
I can see it all so vividly. Very good!

Date: 2014-10-22 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindafishes8.livejournal.com
Brilliant! Explosions and Illya go hand in hand.

Date: 2014-10-22 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
A good idea, and well written indeed. Words just right, and the pacing rivets the attention.

Date: 2014-10-22 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eileen cummings (from livejournal.com)
i think you can write anything! that was probably the best drabble EV-ER.

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