Life or Death -' A Little Drabble Do Ya!' - Feb 4th

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Death, if you’re going to take me, then please, show some mercy and do it soon. The pain has gone on too long and it’s more than I can endure. I have too many injuries, there’s too much loss of blood. Come for me now, Death, and end this misery. The agony is consuming me; it feels like it is all that I am now. If you are not going to take me, then let someone find me. I am begging you, please!

“HE’S IN HERE! Stay with me, Tovarisch. Help is here.”

Not this time then; maybe the next.

Comments

[spikesgirl58.livejournal.com]

Oh, very good. It says so much with so few words!

[(Anonymous)]

You have quite a knack for these drabbles which are succinct and yet convey such a powerful image. Glad you sent NS !

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-) I quite enjoy the challenge of 100 words

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :-) It's surprising how hard these drabbles are.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Ewwww, you dangle a very dark carrot in front of is, but then there's light at the end of that fatalistic tunnel. Nicely done!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-) I like going dark.
I might take them tton the edge of life sometimes, but I can't push them over.

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

*wipes tears from eyes*

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. I hope those are happy tears because he was rescued.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

You tempt fate and then control it.

[pactnmmt.livejournal.com]

PERFECT!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-) I do what I can.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Wow. What a wonderful compliment. Thank you :-)

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

Wow, really touched me.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

Before AND after. You have a knack for this angsty style and I, for one, enjoy it very much. Now pass the tissues. I'm going to re-read this...