Nice visual with the 'flurry of feathers.' You have me worried about Napoleon's digits now; I've never seen frostbite in my nursing career. I understand it's extremely painful as your story demonstrated. I like it when writers get the medical part right, so Kudos from me on that and the rest of your story as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Date: 2015-02-18 08:41 pm (UTC)