Under the Surface - A Little Drabble Do Ya! - 9th March

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Looking deeply into the gaze of the eyes reflected in the rest room mirror, he could see the man inside. Very few people were aware of the hidden side to his personality. He disguised it well, and there was only really his partner who saw what he could see now.

Smoothing down his tie, he set his expression to what everyone expected to see and stepped into the corridor. Almost bumping into Meaghan, Napoleon smiled his multi-watt grin and apologised. She melted with the twinkle in his eyes. She couldn’t see the weight of the world lurking behind the twinkle.

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Comments

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

Good

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

I had a feeling because of the mirror it was Napoleon. Nicely done.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)
I can't imagine Illya staring at himself in the mirror, for all sorts of reasons.

ps. thanks for the heads up about the missing word :-)

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Bravo! Just - bravo!!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :-)

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

"Multi-watt grin," perfect! This is a powerful piece you've written. A few words say so much!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I must admit it wasn't easy.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Oh that's very nice. A lot of depth in those hundred words.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for saying so :-)

[carabele.livejournal.com]

Very nicely realized snippet in the personality of our favorite CEA.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much :-)