U.N.C.L.E. Haiku

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

First small attempt at FanFic - thought I'd try something very different.  Haiku - 5-7-5 sylables, 3 lines.

Brown eyed man staring
Special pointed at a foe
A bird tries to flee

Angelique pouting
"Napoleon, please trust me?"
"Just once more my dear."

Spider on flower
Beauty and death together
Once again twarted

He will never trust
"I will always have your back!"
Blue eyes keeping watch.

Comments

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Oh wow! This is superb. Thank you for posting it.

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

This is excellent, hope to see more writing by you

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

Thank you for your kind comment.

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

You may just - it's taken me some time to work up to this.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Yay! I love this. Thanks for posting it here in Section VII!

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Thank you for this excellent haiku. *melts over the last two lines*

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

Ooo, I liked this very much. Very creative.

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

I finally broke down and did it

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

I know. I love haiku how it creates much more than just three lines

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

Thank you - every one has been very supportive and kind

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Keep it going!

[spikesgirl58.livejournal.com]

Very interesting. You handled them well!

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you decided to post something, and what a triumph it is. Welcome to your writing circle ;)

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

Thank you!