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He opened his eyes with a quiet moan, surveying his surroundings. A hospital room, clean white and sterile.


Not feeling his feet, he looked beneath the sheets in a momentary panic. Everything was there, but numb; his lower legs were in casts.


Wiggling his toes, he found them responsive.  Relieved; he searched for any sign of his partner.  Was he alive?


A nurse popped in and seeing he was awake; she smiled.


“Illya?”


“Is battered and bruised but fine. We made him go lie down; he was up all night with you. You agents are amazing.”


“He is,” Napoleon nodded.

Date: 2016-06-01 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
Good scene setting, and what a fine last line!
Edited Date: 2016-06-01 06:09 pm (UTC)

Date: 2016-06-01 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com
He most certainly is. They both are. Lovely scene :-)

Date: 2016-06-01 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindafishes8.livejournal.com
So much in these one hundred words. Very fine bit of writing.

Date: 2016-06-03 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glennagirl.livejournal.com
A poignant scene, and a winner of a line at the end.

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