[identity profile] jantojones.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] section7mfu
This story is about a mission gone wrong for Illya. (When I first wrote this, back in October 2014, I received a review on fanfiction which said 'Illya doesn't fail!'.)

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Date: 2017-06-24 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com
You really pulled the reader into this story, definitely feeling Illya physical discomfort and his guilt. Good Russian dialogue too!

Thanks for adding this to the Writer's and Readers choice...and if I forgot, thanks for covering the WC last week cuz!

Date: 2017-06-24 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrua7.livejournal.com
Well that gives you an idea of how bad my short term memory is. No you weren't supposed to have done it last week. No apologies. I don't even remember having done it myself.

Either way, thanks again for helping out....

Date: 2017-06-24 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com
A good case, an excellent backstory and very well put together.

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