When Hope is Lost - Pic Fic - Dec 26th

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

I don't like this story much because it feels forced, and not well written. I have been unable to write much for a while, and I really miss it. Despite the failings of this piece, I'm still posting it so, if you feel you would like to offer any, I welcome any constructive criticism you may have.

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Comments

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Wow! An excellent opening paragraph, and the rest of the story was great as well. Sometimes when we think something isn't that good, it turns out way better. Great job with the prompt! Thanks for joining in the last PicFic of the year! I'm trying to get on the bandwagon with the Once upon a time and Short Affair if my muse will cooperate!

[duckys-lady.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this story. I think you are very hard on yourself!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you, cuz.

I'm beginning to wonder if it isn't so much my, muse which is missing, but my confidence,.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :-)

I am often harder on myself than is probably necessary.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Maybe its a little bit of both. Been there did that and am going through it again. My take on this prompt gave me the same feelings.

[pfrye.livejournal.com]

I thought this story was excellent - we are always hard on ourselves

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-D
I'm pleased that people are enjoying it, despite my own misgivings.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

I'm late reading and commenting, but it truly is a good little story. I think you might have written yourself a little bit into it, which is sometimes our best therapy. Keep writing.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-)
I think you may be right.