This is a wow story. I think your muse is back with a vengeance. Your descriptive opening with the candle was excellent. I know you're probably getting sick of hearing this but this could be extended with flashbacks of Illya's training and dealings with Radomil Semyonovich Kozlov (I loved that name!)
Thanks for participating in the PicFic challenge cuz and keep those stories coming while your muse is being cooperative. "D
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Date: 2018-01-23 10:03 pm (UTC)Thanks for participating in the PicFic challenge cuz and keep those stories coming while your muse is being cooperative. "D
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Date: 2018-01-24 08:22 am (UTC)I like putting Russian names together. I just love the way patronymics work :-)
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