"The Island of Dreams Affair" a non-challenge story

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

The Island of Dreams Affair:
Napoleon and Illya are sent to an island in the South Pacific to investigate and destroy a drug manufacturing operation that disguises its product by using black Tahitian pearls.


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Comments

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Thanks for this enjoyable and interesting adventure fic. I'd think readers in Northern Hemispherean winter will particularly like the setting.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you as well for your kind words. You're a fast reader!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

I've left a longer comment on AO3 but, needless to say, I absolutely love this story.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much cuz! That means a lot to me.

I wasn't kidding when I said my muse had come back with a vengeance. If rediscovered the basic story premise with research in my files and then my fingers just went flying on the keyboard. Amazed how quickly I wrote it.

[threecee]

Good story! The OC's were very believable and the villain who was amoral and just in it for the money was a nice change from THRUSH.

If I may offer a minor criticism, there were places in the middle of the story where your fingers didn't quite keep up with your muse and the sentences got a bit scrambled. See the area around "they leaned back against the palm girl" for what I mean. I could still follow the story, but it made a little speed bump.