"The Field Trip"-Chapter 3 -the conclusion. For the HOWDOWE Challenge

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Chapter 1 and 2 HERE

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Comments

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Left my comment on AO3, but I will repeat the main word here. Brilliant!

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Wow Thank you so much cuz!

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Fine twist about Black's objective - another good oc there. So is Susan. She's competent and very bright, but never quite ott. The final action scene is most suspenseful, too. *mops brow*

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I made it look a little scary for Napoleon (though you knew he couldn't be dead)
But made is so until Black fell, you didn't really know who darted him. Sorry for the brow mopping but glad you enjoyed the story.