"Little Brother is Watching " -for the Short Affair Challenge

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Challenge: The Short Affair

-Prompt Word 2 – Rude

-Prompt Colour – Silver

Author: mrua7

Title: “Little Brother is watching”

Word Count: Approximately 990

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Comments

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

That poor man just can't catch a break, LOL. Especially when Illya is around. Excellent as always, Cuz.

Can I make a small suggestion? The part where you have Waverly saying that Llanfair PG is the longest name in all of England should maybe be changed to all of Britain. The Welsh (especially North Walians) tend to get a little annoyed about being called English, LOL.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Will fix...the source info that I used England...oh well. Thanks for the heads up! :D All done!

Glad you enjoyed the story!

[maria-priest.livejournal.com]

So cute and fun! and IK under the stone arch bridge...

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!!

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Thanks for this enjoyable and well written little fic. Illya to the rescue again! The double twist was well done; and good ending.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!! :D Glad you enjoyed the twists, hope they surprised you.

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

They did, and pleasantly.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Good! Thank you for letting me know!

[threecee.livejournal.com]

Ah, Napoleon and spring! Warm sunshine, convertibles, the park. You describe spring so well, I almost think it really exists, but it is snowing  here again.

Waverly does have a suspicious number of attractive young nieces.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Yep, supposed to snow again here tonight. I think we're sooooo over it!

Yes I would say the number attractive nieces might seem suspicious, but at least in my stories Waverly is absolutely in love with his wife. "D