Both their instincts kicked in at the same time...that red flag thing. Illya just reacted a bit faster. Thanks so much for reading and glad you liked it, especially the last line( leaves the door open for a new villain "D) and the Lisa bit too!
Thanks you! Wasn't sure of this one, but at the addition of doubt at the end served for a good set up for another bad group to make it's self known. I've been working on such a story for a long time and hope I can post it soon.
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Date: 2018-07-09 05:10 pm (UTC)Good last line. And the Lisa bit, too.
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Date: 2018-07-10 12:53 am (UTC)I am so wishing I had a piece of thar cake.
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Date: 2018-07-10 02:05 am (UTC)Me too!
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