Short Affair Challenge for 30th July 2018; 945 words; Borrow, Black/ A Word At The Right Time

[lilidelafield.livejournal.com]

Okay, my first challenge story for months and months. I actually enjoyed writing it, so I hope it comes across. Find it on AO3
A Word At The Right Time.

Comments

[threecee.livejournal.com]

It comes across very well. The description of Illya's guilt and feeling he failed his duty is very well done.

[lilidelafield.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. It's so long since I've written anything for MFU I'm glad it was enjoyable. I really appreciate your comment.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Absolutely wonderful ! You show Illya's sense of misplaced guilt perfectly. Well done :-)

[lilidelafield.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :-)
I don't know why this story was suggested by the colour black....odd how the mind works. It has been so long it took me a while to get back inside Illya's head,so I am really happy it worked. Thank you so much!!