Trapped!

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Once upon a Time affair. Prompt: first paragraph; theme: disagreement

Getting out of a trap isn't easy.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/15911853

Illya and Napoleon mid-argument

Comments

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Brilliant!! I was quite a way in before it dawned on me that I wasn't being told what I thought I was being told. I loved the bit of banter about good boys and prayers :-)

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Hah! I wondered how far in people would get before realising. When did you?

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

About the time you cut to the observers for the second time. I realised that no names had been mentioned. I was an embarrassingly long way in.

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Excellent. Don't be embarrassed - it was deliberate.

[duckys-lady.livejournal.com]

I was led down the garden path myself! Even when you cut to the observers, I thought it was our writers! Well done. :-)

[hypatia-66.livejournal.com]

Well that was fun, fooling people. Thanks!