Writer's choice: Just obeying orders

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I originally posted this story about Vietnam in January, but when my husband read it recently he made some useful comments about improving its structure, so I partly rewrote it.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/17510339

Illya listening to a witness

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Thanks for posting for the Writer's and Reader's Choice!