section7mfu | From My Personal Archives... The Raga Affair

I wrote this story in August of 2012, pretty early in my writing endeavors. I remember doing a fair amount of research on what was at the time of the story, Bombay. It has been renamed Mumbai, as most already know. As I re-read it, it was a pleasant surprise to find a pretty good sense of the place, or at least it seems so to me.
I probably need to go back and do some editing, the too frequent use of the word 'had' is a little worrisome, and I think a common mistake many of us make. In a nod to yesterday's discussion, perhaps we need to go over some things like that; words that can be replaced when they become burdensome.
All of that being said, you can find the story recently published to AO3 by clicking on the photo.

The Raga Affair